JeffreyDriver's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ligament Chronicles]

There's a few things in this which need fixing first:
The controls in your tutorial are wrong, the controls are A,D,Space.
You start off-screen.
The camera movement is nauseating.

yelllowflash responds:

The camera movement was intentional.

Will fix the others ASAP.

[Edit]
Couldn't fix the off screen thing. Problem with resolution when built into webGL.
Fixed tutorial.

[Warzone World]

Far too much grinding for far too little content. It feels like you've tried to create something to make money and then wrapped a game around it. Also there's a game-breaking bug. There's a country in Africa you can't access.

ktm00 responds:

Thanks for the feedback... I've fixed the bug. I shall learn from this experiment to make better games in the future.

[Meliora]

I need to double-click with the mouse to get it to move. Would be better if it followed the mouse.

[Blockrush]

Well done. This was lots of fun. Managed to complete it with all crowns. Easy enough to pick up, but the later levels start to get a little challenging. Most of it could be understood without having to read the instructions regarding the different objects (difficult feat to achieve considering the graphic constraints.)

The difficulty ramped up nicely, but overall it was a little on the easy side. Would definitely like to see more levels.

oskar-codes responds:

Thanks for the feedback ! We are constently designing and creating levels, so you should see more of them added to the game in the future.

[Danger Joe 3D]

Quite fun, but with a couple of issues. As with the original Wolfenstein 3D, finding your way around can be a little frustrating. Maybe add extra tile types and decoration so you can tell if you're somewhere you've been before. This a major issue for level 4.

Also, the start of level 3 is really hard on the eyes. I gave up on that level after a matter of seconds on my first try. I did try again and powered through until the flashing stopped but I think you should just remove the flashing completely.

[Eat All The Mantecol]

Need to fix your game dimensions, I can't see much of the game screen.

ArielLeguizamon responds:

thanks! we have already fixed it, better in fullscreen :)

[Maverick's Fury]

It's pretty good, and looks like it could be quite fun, but there's a few issues that are stopping me from playing further. The controls, particularly jumping can sometimes be unresponsive (A huge problem on the second level). The camera sometimes moves strangely, not revealing the way forward, or letting the player disappear of screen.

A more minor issue is the speed of reloading after death. It should be much quicker.

Fred-Oliveira responds:

Let's look at the phase 2 camera system.

On the game restart faster, we will reduce the time before the fade of game over that will improve the experience.

[Maybe Bag]

Having platforms off-screen that I need to hopefully land on is poor level design.

[The Fisherman]

No instructions! You have it listed as "Adventure - Point 'n Click" but clicking seems to do nothing. Space skips text, but it doesn't reveal the current text, it just skips it.

[Quest Helper]

This looks interesting and seems like it could be quite fun but it's flawed.

- You move far too slowly
- Interaction range is far too small, and even when the "Press E" text appears, you still might not be close enough to the object.
- Not enough info what I should be doing or why.