JeffreyDriver's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Creeper World: User Space]

Really? How the fuck did I stumble across this shit? Damn you 'You might also enjoy...' Well, there goes my productive evening. (I actually had stuff to get on with, you know?)

[Dark Maze]

This needs quite a bit of work to make it better.

I know that the lighting is there to make it scary, but it's really hard to see where you're going.

Without some sort of map it's just wandering around randomly as it all looks the same. Perhaps include a map that you uncover as you go. Also, having different textures for areas would be useful. Things like arches, doorways, windows and other decoration would help you know if you've been somewhere before.

I did not find a single orb. Perhaps they could project a beam of light up into the sky so you have an idea of where they are? I don't even know how many there are.

Rather than just have the one floor you could have steps leading up to walkways. It would make it more interesting and allow players to look over parts of the maze to try and figure out where to go.

Overall it just needs some way to guide the player around and some polish.

[Create & Bounce!]

Instructions!

EDIT: Just put the instructions in the description. Shift is not an intuitive jump key.

Also, the respawn should not have the same momentum as the one that just died.

Blood splatters cause loads of lag.

VNGames responds:

Oh Thanks man, i Will make in tomorrow

[the horror House]

I was enjoying this. I got to the computer and couldn't figure out how to get further. One slightly annoying thing is that clicks don't work over the white lines. Rarely an issue though.

[Nazi Zombies]

I like the idea, but it's pretty flawed. The bunker seems too large for one person to protect, also, reload should happen automatically if the clip is empty. (Maybe at a slight time penalty?)

I also had no idea where enemies were. Upgrades/repairing seem very expensive.

What was your best score? I couldn't see getting past wave three. It feels like an early prototype.

There doesn't seem to be much strategy as it's more luck based.

[Frankie Foster Dating Sim]

Ok, you can make games. But they're shit. Deliberately so. Why not work on improving your games (and yourself)?

[Jiggle KiMS BUTT]

Do something constructive with your life. Those 5* enablers of yours aren't doing you any favours.

[DynaBlocks: The Game]

This isn't even yours.

EDIT: You're just uploading other people's games.

sebpistol14 responds:

why

[Junior Juggle]

Broken. Items are spawning off the right of the screen.

EDIT: That's fixed, but don't always register.

Miltage responds:

Just pushed a fix. Could you let me know if it works for you now?

[Royal Duck Runaway: Prologue]

Nice point n click game. Graphics are good, puzzles fairly logical.

TwoPigs responds:

Thanks for playing the demo! Glad you enjoyed it. Cheers!