JeffreyDriver's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[EscapeTheMaze]

You can't see enough of the maze to know where you're going or where the obstacles are.

[Outlawed John : The Beginings 2 (Remake With Health)]

I can tell that you're just starting learning to making games but:
Arrow keys need to be locked because they are still scrolling the screen
A mixture of graphic styles is never good
It's really buggy. There's platforms that you fall straight through
Why have a gun if I can't shoot it?

EDIT: Then how are you supposed to get across? I've tried to give you some useful feedback rather than just rating low and moving on. I hope you continue to learn and improve.

HipeBoss responds:

Dude The ghost block in the begining of a game is not a bug. I just started to learning construct for 5 days so PLZ give me not a 1 star

[The Warehouse]

If I'm the one who organized that warehouse I can see why the manager is pissed off.

Can I actually interact with anything? It just seems I can walk around and push things over, but can't do anything else, such as open something.

I tried a few times but couldn't find the key. As the manager cannot be seen I don't know if there's any sort of mechanic there. Can I run from him? I should be able to hide in wardrobes. Generally it needs more to do.

Trell13 responds:

i'll probably add more but the manager person isnt loading because it's an html5 game. So I'll have to figure something out. thanks for the review tho :)

[FPS Shooter 3D City Wars]

I think you got your game/description a bit mixed up.

[JuantankamonRedux]

Kinda fun and looks great. I think there should be a map for the mummy. Perhaps one that you uncover as you go. The guard definitely has the upper hand.

[Beverly Hills Cop: Hot Nights (Parody)]

Pretty funny, but it does have some issues.

1. No save (or if there is, it's not working.)
2. Most badges don't seem to be working (none are for me.)
3. I'd like to know how long a stage is.
4. Body armor is really hard to spot.
5. I got to stage 3 and retried a few times but gave up. There seemed to be too few armor/health drops.

Newshield responds:

Alright, thanks for the response. To answer everything in order:
1. Nope, there's no save only a continue point but, you have to reach a checkpoint (meaning another stage) in order to activate it. I'll still check and update it though because its suppose to work.

2. Those stupid badges...I'll check those as well.
3. Shoot and shoot and shoot, the stage ends when enough criminals are put down. Trust me, the game switches from shooting and goes to a another type of game play so it's worth it putting the time in.

4. I guess I could increase the body armor and health.
5. Wish you didn't give up, after stage 3 is when the game play switches. Thanks for review and look for the post to ensure the updates.

[Infinity corridor]

No idea what I'm doing or why. Very little appears to be happen. Also, the screen bobbing up and down is really nauseating.

I read a note, turning into a tree trunk and then just wandered endlessly.

IgnMihail responds:

(I don't know English language)
When you're tree just find the table with dead tablets.
Eat it and go.

[FPS Game by UE4]

"Downloading X MB/1.2BG" For a web game??? I gave up waiting for the engine to launch. Optimise your games.

[Ice Car]

I can't really rate it until you fix the camera.

fabilan responds:

Ok I'll fix it and improve it a lot

[gift]

I was really enjoying this, but it threw an error and I had to refresh to find it didn't save my game.

I do like it, but the rooms seem a little bland with just bare grey walls, and the graphics generally need some consistently. Also there needs to be some idea of where to use certain objects, particularly keys. If you're using a number of keys there needs to be a hint, i.e "it's locked and has a tiny keyhole", "it's locked and has brass keyhole."

And navigation could be a bit clearer. I found some places by accident.

Keep up the good work though.

PyroPixieGames responds:

I appreciate the feedback, thanks for playing!